Evidence of manipulation of final comic – Editing – Annotations of improvements made in terms of inking, layout, speech to clarify meaning (M3)

 

in this edit that i did i was drawing out the background to look like and headquaters where they gather information on there next mission and where they find out certain information of there villian and what has happened that the public dont know about yet.

in the second panel that i made it is set in the same location as my first panel on both of my panels the pen texture that I had used was HB pencil, 6B pencil and the Procreate pencil to deaw out my outlince for where the darc colurs are i used the the hard brush and a soft pastel for the cielings.

for my third panel that i have added i used castle i drew out i used alot of  reference form castles from films like barbie and alice and the wounderland to get a vage idea of what i want my castle to look like.

In my last panel of my comic page i wanted all of the action to go down inside of the castle which i found some refrence of it from all the disney prince movies that had simce in ballrooms like beauty and the beast and cinderella and i wanted to recreate it in my own way. the pencil that i used to make the pattern for the flooring was called zombie skin to give it a fancy pattern like alot of ballrooms have in disney movies which i tried to recreate in my comic. the rest of my comic book is going to have the same exact background as my fourth panel.

in this edit i decided to keep this panel with just the background so i can have a long script in the panel explaing what is happening.

in this screenshot i added all my characters in that are in that scene which is ther command and he is explain what Milan has to once she has her costume on 

in this screenshot of my two panels is of my two characters having a conversation and about to show mila her secret invention.

in this screenshot this is when montana and milan first meet and have the first conventation about the queen.

This screenshot mila has saved the queen and came back to get montana and take her into costady but she escaped and ran away.  

thos is a screenshot of my characters in this scene where milan leaves too go save the queen once Montana is tied up

milan comes back and finds out that montana has escaped 

mila broke mintanas invention so she wont destory anything and try to take over the world

montana explanes what her invention does and what she is going to do with it in the panel and milan is in disbelief about it 

milan is escaping leaving everything behind to come up with another p;an.

montana explaining what her inventions do

In theses screenshoot that I have taken for the first step I went to windows so ic an get the shapes for speech bubbles so I could added my text inside and then I decided to uses a rectangle to use for the narrators voice. the second step I took was to added my speech bubbles to the rest of my panels with the text . idid theses to steps for every panel and page.

In Screenshot I exported my pages as JPG and saved it to my Unit 9 folder.